Kia ora, I’m Nicole from St Patrick’s School. I enjoyed the part when you put some descriptive words into your writing . Did you think about a few more sentences? To improve, you could arrange the photos so it’s equal. Great job. Reply
Kia ora, I’m Nicole from St Patrick’s School. I enjoyed the part when you put some descriptive words into your writing . Did you think about a few more sentences? To improve, you could arrange the photos so it’s equal. Great job.